Tuesday, March 13, 2012

MWP2 Outline with Introduction Paragraph


INTRO

Online social networking has become a norm in today’s flowering technological prowess; socializing teens and corporations alike take care of their personal and professional business on sites where it is efficient to digitally connect and communicate effectively—but as the plethora of social networking sites expand, adding thousands of users daily, a new issue is becoming more and more debated—could our privacy, to both our personal and professional information, be at risk? It’s true that because of the recent and explosive expansion of online socialization that a vast amount of private information has become available digitally, a click away for the people that know their way around the internet, but perhaps it isn’t just strangers and ‘creepers’ that we have to worry about getting our information; according to one study, today’s online conditions have “made it necessary to consider the invasion of privacy by corporations” (Barnes 6).  Online ad generators that run marketing scams directly off of massive databanks of information harvested from social network users, given openly from the network administrators themselves—this has led to a newly posed question: even if you change your privacy settings so that only friends can see your information, should online social networks still be allowed to garner your information to their ad-generating comrades to redirect it back to you and your friends, and maybe even other people? People generally share not only photos of themselves, but also their hometown, birthday, e-mail, phone number, who they are friends with, and even where they are by address at given intervals of the day, giving a multitude of angles and precedents that social ad generators could use to their advantage, making it so advertisers “can co-opt the power of an individual's social network to target advertising and engage their audience” (Tucker 2).  So, stalking and harassing aside, who is at fault for online privacy infringements, what are possible resolutions, and who should be responsible for putting them into practice?


DEFINITION

SocialAd
Ad Generators
Terms of Agreement
Privacy Settings

LITERATURE REVIEW

*83% of facebook users say it “helps them interact… with friends” (Debatin 93)
            *“Only 69% of respondents indicated that they had actually changed their default privacy settings” (Debatin 93)
            *Predicted “Facebook users have a limited understanding of privacy settings
in social network services” and, consequently, will probably not even attempt to take advantage of their privacy settings options (Debatin 93)

            *“Social networking tools have become indespensible for teenagers, who often think their lives are private as long as their parents are not reading their journals (Barnes 4)
            *Limiting your privacy settings so that the information you post is “friends-only”, will, according to one study, exert “audience control over social network site disclosures” (Stutzman and Kramer-Duffield 2)
            *Whether someone generally goes “friends-only” without being prompted depends on several factors such as how many friends they have, what their educational setting is, and their purposes in using Facebook (Stutzman and Kramer-Duffield 6)
            *“Due to the persistent digital nature of Facebook, utterances that would normally go unrecorded are stored and replicated in the sociotechnical system” (Stutzman and Kramer-Duffield 8)

*“In particular, social networks will be able to exploit their considerable inherent network effects to enlarge their share of advertising dollar       (Tucker 24)
            *“Social norms also impact users’ choices to disclose or protect information (Strater and Lipford 115)
            *“Participants with private profiles reported that they had restricted their profiles due to previous privacy intrusions on either Facebook or MySpace”, including strangers obtaining either their phone number or e-mail, and persistently harassing a user until they had to permanently change their number or e-mail; even though they changed their privacy settings afterward, a strong indication that there was something in their  power that they could have done to prevent the intrusion, they still blame the social networks for letting such events happen (Strater and Lipford 116)

ARGUMENT/ANALYSIS/PROPOSAL

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CONCLUSION

*EDIT*      If there was this collaborative effort between stricter, more efficient privacy regulations by the social networking sites and the distinct awareness and restricted posting and availability of information on behalf of the users, both by not posting what they don’t want accessed and by changing their privacy settings to better suit their desires without infringing on their relationship-cultivating uses of the sites, then perhaps the endless game of blame-throwing would end and online privacy would no longer be an issue in an age where tools like networking can be rewarding and profitable if done correctly.

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